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Brad Seaman's avatar

Retired dentist here. That conversation was probably less one-sided than you thought, John. Over the years those mumbles, grunts, moans, and gurgles turn into a language all their own. Add in the occasional sentence fragment, and we usually get the gist.

John Lovie's avatar

True enough, Brad. The one-sidedness was in the telling!

Kirie Pedersen's avatar

Great writing "exercise" John! You captured that issue of having a chatty sweet person working in your mouth and yet you somehow managed to maintain a conversation. For me, going to the dentist - a lifelong torture event due to complex issues with bone and bite - is one of life's worst tortures. Yet we too have a great practice here in Port Townsend - the father the periodontist/surgeon, the son the dentist/manager, and some amazing staff over the years who make it feel safe and comfortable. See, you brought all that out!

Catherine Bachy's avatar

John, this is wonderful. I was with you the whole piece. And I can so relate to those awkward conversations in the dentist chair. Thank you

John Lovie's avatar

Thank you so much, Catherine!

Caravan Writers Collective's avatar

We love this one, John!

Holly Starley's avatar

Love seeing what this has turned into after being present for its beginnings! Fantastic dialogue!

John Lovie's avatar

Thank you, Holly! That means a lot.

Mary Beth Rew Hicks's avatar

Loved this... felt like I was there, but on a good way.

John Hancock's avatar

Nice to see that you’re polishing a skill that I know you to have already. That’s the whole oral stewardship theory: preserve what works, and get some professional help from time to time. Keep writing, please, and I’ll keep forwarding. Bravo for all you do for your communities.

John Lovie's avatar

Thank you, John. A little professional help from time to time helps me get out of my own way!

Gary Spangler's avatar

What a fine post, John Lovie! Over the time I’ve followed you, I’ve learned how much of a conversationalist you are. Now, even in a dental hygienist’s chair! Excellent post…again.

John Lovie's avatar

Gary, thank you so much,

Jill's avatar

Enjoyed the hell out of this John 👏

John Lovie's avatar

Jill, thank you so much! 🙏

Charles Clark's avatar

Well done narrative John. I could really sense the dialogue as written since I have had that same experience at my dentist office

John Lovie's avatar

Thanks so much, Chuck!

sunny's avatar

Well done! I loved this post!

John Lovie's avatar

Thank you so much, Sunny!